Date and Time By Phil Kaye: Second Third

 The second third of date and time makes things between the narrator and the audience more personal.  The narrator reflects upon his past self, majority of his past has been a constant battle between self identity, and self worth. The narrator also highlights that there is no longer  struggle between happiness and sadness, Kaye begins to let the audience inside his headspace, what he really believes to be right and wrong. In his poem depression, you're given the impression that this would be something he's ashamed of or something he's trying to hide. The poem reads, "I enjoy the company/ our easy camaraderie/ though after a while/ it begins to hurt/ pulls in places I cannot reach". This particular excerpt displays how the feeling of depression is affecting Kaye. It seems almost as if he wasn't sure what to expect at first so he welcomed this new feeling, having no speculation or suspicion of what may come next. As this feeling grew stronger and stronger he's begun to feel some of the pain that comes along with this feeling, this particular instance captures the embodiment of what many individuals go through on a day to day basis. The poem also reads, "the bedroom calling again/ the hours pass/ the muscles adjust/ and I cannot feel/ anything at all." The end of this poem demonstrates how Kaye has fully succumbed to this feeling of depression. He mentions how he no longer has the physical strength and he also says he cannot feel anything at all. This last line represents the feeling of true sadness, there's no resistance, there's no denial, just acceptance.

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